Comments on: CHAPTER IV – GENESIS http://nadeemsani.net/2010/04/29/chapter-iv-genesis/ I think, therefore I am ! Wed, 14 Sep 2011 04:42:47 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: nadeemsani http://nadeemsani.net/2010/04/29/chapter-iv-genesis/comment-page-1/#comment-2038 nadeemsani Thu, 28 Oct 2010 06:11:45 +0000 http://nadeemsani.net/?p=126#comment-2038 Caught up in mundane matters of earning a livelihood, I still feel that squeezing pain and breathlessness when I think about her. And its often..... Caught up in mundane matters of earning a livelihood, I still feel that squeezing pain and breathlessness when I think about her. And its often…..

]]> By: Seema http://nadeemsani.net/2010/04/29/chapter-iv-genesis/comment-page-1/#comment-2037 Seema Thu, 28 Oct 2010 03:57:56 +0000 http://nadeemsani.net/?p=126#comment-2037 This is your truth, I know. What next? This is your truth, I know. What next?

]]> By: nadeemsani http://nadeemsani.net/2010/04/29/chapter-iv-genesis/comment-page-1/#comment-1417 nadeemsani Fri, 30 Apr 2010 16:57:09 +0000 http://nadeemsani.net/?p=126#comment-1417 Its called poetic license :-) Its called poetic license :-)

]]> By: Backbencher http://nadeemsani.net/2010/04/29/chapter-iv-genesis/comment-page-1/#comment-1414 Backbencher Fri, 30 Apr 2010 13:27:07 +0000 http://nadeemsani.net/?p=126#comment-1414 From the seat right behind the scene of cation ....this looks quite promising....though the smells area bit off....they were more earthy - as I reacall but go on - a wee bit of fragrance hurts no one From the seat right behind the scene of cation ….this looks quite promising….though the smells area bit off….they were more earthy – as I reacall but go on – a wee bit of fragrance hurts no one

]]> By: srinivas http://nadeemsani.net/2010/04/29/chapter-iv-genesis/comment-page-1/#comment-1413 srinivas Fri, 30 Apr 2010 05:45:38 +0000 http://nadeemsani.net/?p=126#comment-1413 Nadeem sir, The continuity is missing, as every time you are publishing one page, that to not an daily basis but as per ur convenience (of course). My view is please publish the story not in pages but at least 3 pages at a time if you have already have manuscript ready so that the story goes uninterrupted, and we don't have to go back and fro trying to connect. Srinivas Nadeem sir,

The continuity is missing, as every time you are publishing one page, that to not an daily basis but as per ur convenience (of course). My view is please publish the story not in pages but at least 3 pages at a time if you have already have manuscript ready so that the story goes uninterrupted, and we don’t have to go back and fro trying to connect.

Srinivas

]]> By: Nivedita http://nadeemsani.net/2010/04/29/chapter-iv-genesis/comment-page-1/#comment-1412 Nivedita Fri, 30 Apr 2010 05:15:52 +0000 http://nadeemsani.net/?p=126#comment-1412 I was sneaking here since past to days in search of chapter iv. N here it is.... Gosh! Im lovin it....the characters, the plot seems so very live to me. I was sneaking here since past to days in search of chapter iv. N here it is…. Gosh! Im lovin it….the characters, the plot seems so very live to me.

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